I believe what you composed was actually very logical.
However, think about this, what if you added a
little information? I am not saying your information is not solid, however suppose you added
a title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean پارکور شیروان - پارکور بجنورد is kinda boring.
You should peek at Yahoo's front page and see how they write post
headlines to grab viewers to click. You might add a related video or a related picture or two to get
people excited about everything've written. In my opinion, it might make your posts a little bit more